Monday, July 30, 2007
Edison "Building Community" v3
I tried to trim out the faculty cohesion section, but I don’t know what I could trim without loosing big ideas. For what it’s worth, I also don’t really feel that it’s too long. Made other changes as per Marla’s notes.
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This feels tighter and more focused.
I like the treatment of titles/subtitles in this clip. Not sure if this was intentional or not, but the treatment of "Dynamic Instruction" subtitle (last one in this clip) does not match the other two (it's larger and in the middle of the screen).
Thanks.
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