Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Health Opps "Preview" v1

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I like this one a lot. I especially like the way you used the split screen. I'm wondering if we could tighten this a bit more? Part of me feels like we're telling too much of the story in the preview. What do you think? If you're inclined, let me know if you'd like suggestions re: tightening. If not, this one is good to go as is.