Great notes Marla. I think that your conceptual framework is actually really strong, and I agree that we need to shorten the clips rather than split up. The problem is that everything is so great with this school that it’s painful to loose stuff. But, as always, less is probably more and I think that this one is in much better shape. I took off 1:30 and I think it's focused and really strong.
I think it’s best to just cut out Carlos here. His voice is present in most of the other clips and I agree that it comes out of nowhere. I looked at his other interview and there wasn’t really as powerful a line on this subject.
Monday, July 30, 2007
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Agreed. I think this works well. Thank you!
I agree. Cutting Carlos out really pulled it to gether.
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