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I'm wondering if we can connect this a bit more to the rest of the school. Carron's comments begin to do this. It might also help to include comments from the interview with Mark/Inez/Julie about how this program frees up counselors' time? Maybe also use some establishing shots of the school interior or exterior? Sorry I wasn't able to facilitate getting better broll for this one!
Omit Jon's comments: "If I were to say percentage....in terms of a data base online." and instead begin with "overall cost, the foundation covers..." If you see other places to tighten this clip, that would be great!
I agree with Marla that this should be tied more into what the school is doing in terms of getting students into college. It looks like an ad for College Bound - although it is a great program. Any footage on their counselors?
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I'm wondering if we can connect this a bit more to the rest of the school. Carron's comments begin to do this. It might also help to include comments from the interview with Mark/Inez/Julie about how this program frees up counselors' time? Maybe also use some establishing shots of the school interior or exterior? Sorry I wasn't able to facilitate getting better broll for this one!
Omit Jon's comments: "If I were to say percentage....in terms of a data base online." and instead begin with "overall cost, the foundation covers..." If you see other places to tighten this clip, that would be great!
Thanks!
I agree with Marla that this should be tied more into what the school is doing in terms of getting students into college. It looks like an ad for College Bound - although it is a great program. Any footage on their counselors?
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