Monday, July 9, 2007

Edison "Real World Applications" version 1

2 comments:

Kate Melton said...

The mouse squad shots are great!

I found the section with the electrician teacher confusing because his voice is heard over b-roll of him talking to a student.

Unknown said...

I love the older student giving guidance to her younger peers! The electrical lab footage is really strong as well (although the color looks a little green/gray to me and I do agree with Kate's comment above). I had a little difficulty hearing Dominick in the hallway, but I really like what he says. Is there a way to highlight the mouse squad student who says she can build a computer from scratch? Impressive!

Here are some onscreen text ideas:

Title:

Providing Real World Experiences

Subtitles:

Community Action
Business Applications
Workplace Quality
Student Leadership

Thanks!