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Subtitles: Faculty Cohesion Student-Teacher Connections (transition at hallway shot) Dynamic Instruction (transition at "the biggest problem....")
Do you think this one could be shorter/tighter? I think the poetry website demo might go on too long.
Also, the end felt a little like it just drifted away...not sure what to do about that since I do like the point she makes, but it's not dynamically made...too bad we don't have any exterior arrival shots! Other ideas?
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Title:
Building School Community
Subtitles:
Faculty Cohesion
Student-Teacher Connections (transition at hallway shot)
Dynamic Instruction (transition at "the biggest problem....")
Do you think this one could be shorter/tighter? I think the poetry website demo might go on too long.
Also, the end felt a little like it just drifted away...not sure what to do about that since I do like the point she makes, but it's not dynamically made...too bad we don't have any exterior arrival shots! Other ideas?
Thanks!
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