Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Law and Public Service "Success" version 2

I made all of Marla's changes and broke up quotes throughout. I'm not sure that I think Marina's "success is achieving your goals" should be right there in the beginning, but I think the other changes help this clip. All student mentions of success (or ideas suggesting success) are included in the clip.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Thanks! I think Marina is fine at the beginning since Nick follows up with comments about success.