Friday, May 11, 2007

Cardozo "Success" Version 2

I looked through the student interviews and couldn't find "I recommended you for the growth program...and kids say 'that's so cool!'" Is it somewhere else? Was I maybe not filming yet?

Regardless, I think that you really get a sense of the caring going on at Cardozo in this clip.

I also don't think that it will work to repeat "it's touchy feely." It just feels odd and amateurish, similar to when you see a shot repeated and think that the editor was lazy to miss it. If you're married to the idea, I can show you a version with it in there.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Yes, the tone of the school comes through nicely here!

The "it's so cool" comment is from the middle guidance counselor. She's paraphrasing.

I trust your judgement on not repeating Rick's quote.

I think we might be able to tighten this one up? See comment on Resources clip.

Thanks!