Resequenced per Marla's notes. I think it's much stronger.
I'm not sold on Octavia beacuse I find her hard to understand, but I agree that it's nice to hear comments from students we filmed in class.
Friday, May 11, 2007
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I could understand Octavia in most places except for one exchange in the classroom, so I think this is ok. We can see what everyone else thinks. We could also subtitle the unclear pieces?
I'm wondering if this and all the other clips could be shorter. I can look carefully at places to cut interview pieces if that would help. What do you think?
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