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2 comments:
This is looking good. Here are a couple of additional suggestions:
Change "problems" to "challenges" in the on-screen text.
Is it possible to slow down the fast-forwarded exterior shots a bit?
Move Sheila toward the beginning of this clip, between the 1st and 2nd students.
End the science classroom bit with "you're about to find out" and omit "we don't mainain our roads"
Pare down the two guidance counselor's interviews, and be sure to omit "the line of kids waiting to see you"
The end seems a little abrubt?
I love it! Hope you do to. Thanks.
Marla
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